The story uses fate powers which don’t really work with this universe in addition it isn’t really that entertaining and the guy makes no difference to the story in fact it seems to be going in the direction of the mc becoming a subordinate of the slime tbh the slime has far more potential than the mc. Without the predator skill the mc will be weaker unless author adds some convenience power to give him a power up I’d like to see new things introduced not just rewriting the original but with a weaker mc
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