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Review Detail of NakedFury in Dio El

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NakedFury
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What started as an interesting plot device, having the MC be a Kryptonian, has turned into a very bad story by author. First its the grammar. There are too many inconsistencies in the writing and formatting to be comfortable when reading it. Too many simple mistakes that it seems the author is too lazy to fix. Then we go to the uninspired and quite frankly lame conversations the author writes. We do not know how the characters react in the conversation and you can be lost while trying to read them because they are just lines without even the simple: superman replied or said or anything similar. There is zero world building that is not already there from the comics. I stopped reading because I could not take the stupidity anymore. Unnecessary decisions made by the MC and just zero interest in the story anymore. Do not waste you time reading this.

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