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Review Detail of Little_Lord in Evil Prince, Come Play With Me

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It's quite funny to read but there are too many plots hole and random stuffs that I couldn't keep up with.... 1. Power- what level master equals 20 and grandmaster equal 40 and then there was no more mention about it... 2. FL at first said she had a broken meridian since birth, that's why she helped that MURONG Ghost Girl in order to exchange for spiritual fruit to repair her broken meridian, but in a few chapters after Author changed to she didn't have one since the beginning... LIKE WHAT THE FUCK... 3. A LITTLE BIT OF SEXUAL LANGUAGE OR CONSENSUS maybe funny, but if there are too many there, it will make a novel lost its value 4. WORLD - should explain a bit about which continent she was in, how many countries, background of the story and power stuff. Then STICK TO IT, NOT JUST CREATE AND THEN THROUGH TO THE BACK OF YOUR HEAD. 5. MC BACKGROUND - There's not much to MC background yet, as to what she could do and she could pull out random stuffs at anytime when others needed, but when it came to her time of needed? The only antidote to her poison is s6x. When her maid was poisoned, she stuffed pills in her mouth, but when it came to her, the only solution is s6x. I felt like omg, what's her occupation here? A genius doctor or what? Why could she know what the poison is it? and what is the antidote? In total, Quite confused and random stuffs....I don't recommend it to anyone who is under 18. Also author should put consensus to inappropriate words and sentence at time as well.

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