Item: Evil Prince, Come Play With Me
Rating: 3.6
Author: NoNameJustFame

NoNameJustFameLv64yr

2020-04-28 07:43

huge plot holes and an ADHD FL but overall a fun read if you turn off the skeptical part of your brain. -ignore the lack of a power system -ignore the fact that the FL transmigrated but adjusted shockingly quickly and doesn't seem to value her life (maybe she thinks its all a dream?) -ignore the fact that they info dump stuff like you should already know it ignore the lack of worldbuilding (where is she even in, what is space, how can she teleport without a set destination?) -ignore the fact that the FL was the one to take advantage of the ML even though he was physically stronger than her -ignore the fact that the FL's maid is an idiot who goes along with whatever stupid thing she decides to do -ignore the fact that the FL is hated by absolutely everyone and is considered trash even when she wins 10 on 1 fights

Evil Prince, Come Play With Me

Sunset

4.4

1144 Chs

Liked by 22 people

Replies8

BabypearlLv13

There's too much things to ignore, why not ignore the fact FL is FL, lol 😂😂 Btw what's ADHD FL?

4yr

CrystalDagerLv14

WOW..............lol

4yr

NoNameJustFameLv6

ADHD stands for attention deficit hyperactivity disorder. It is a medical condition. A person with ADHD has differences in brain development and brain activity that affect attention, the ability to sit still, and self-control. Basically she’s all over the place

Babypearl:There's too much things to ignore, why not ignore the fact FL is FL, lol 😂😂 Btw what's ADHD FL?

4yr

BabypearlLv13

Thanks for enlightening me.

NoNameJustFame:ADHD stands for attention deficit hyperactivity disorder. It is a medical condition. A person with ADHD has differences in brain development and brain activity that affect attention, the ability to sit still, and self-control. Basically she’s all over the place

4yr

Tzin99Lv15

that id all of those that make me want to know how the author will sort it all to make the story a success. bringing the conventional transmigration plot together with the weird reactions of the various carachters is no easy work. more, please

4yr

SUPER_WEIRDOLv15

While the book is progressing I'm sure she will explain it as it progress.. Especially if it's a 1-2k chapter book

Tzin99:that id all of those that make me want to know how the author will sort it all to make the story a success. bringing the conventional transmigration plot together with the weird reactions of the various carachters is no easy work. more, please

4yr

SUPER_WEIRDOLv15

You should have just struggled for a 1 star... Or say the book isn't worth it.. Instead of all those ignores.. Ah

4yr

NoNameJustFameLv6

It’s not bad tho It doesn’t deserve 1 star It’s just kinda random

SUPER_WEIRDO:You should have just struggled for a 1 star... Or say the book isn't worth it.. Instead of all those ignores.. Ah

4yr

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