Review Detail of Alisooo in "The lost chance" (One Shot)

Well, I know my writing quality is suck, with this one shot I know now how hard to write a story, that many loose and error cannot be covered. But it's still good as long as the major and big issues can be fix. But well, with this experience I say - Writing story with a long series is hard as fudge. I am not biased with my own creation (just only a bit tbh), because I know my own limitation. And well, this story sucks. But I recommend for everyone who will come across with this to give this small story a shot! You won't regret reading this! This is my proud damn creation! READ IT!!!