Review Detail of Potatochipz in Infection: Dying Days

ok, i'll write an honest review since i catch up to the last chapter now (ch. 69) and is waiting for an update. i don't usually write a review but since i like the story and want to help the write to improve his/her writing then i'll leave my honest review here. please note that this is based on my opinion so you're free to agree or disagree. first, i want to say that i really like how the author change the POV between characters. that was creative and refreshing. the author is also really good at pacing the story and the characters is.. well, stay true to their character. i like how that the author doesn't make the MC and his group always have it easy, they always struggle to get what they want. he/she doesn't hesitate to put the MC in a disadvantage which makes the story more exciting, but maybe you can make someone from the group (or even the MC himself) get a serious injury like broken arm or something which will makes things more inconvenience for them. i think that will put more suspense into the story (just don't makes it permanent). now, i think the biggest problem that the author has to fix is the grammar. i won't talk much about this but if the author can fix the grammar to at least up to 90% then i believe we as the readers will have an even better experience reading this great story.. well, idk if the author will ever read this but if he/she does, then i hope it helps. overall this story is worth reading and still got a lot of room to get better. once again, this is just my personal opinion after reading it this far (ch.69). good luck!