Review Detail of niharikabhol in ABCDEFGHI

First three good part. The length of chapters are really good. So people like who really love reading will be hooked. Your character description skills are also quite nice. The way you have described Alice's features and nature is commendable. But the writing needs to improve like the punctuation, spacing and grammar. It becomes a bit difficult to read on a movie phone. Overall too early to judge as many more chapters are yet to come. Keep writing 😊