Review Detail of Luna1777 in ABCDEFGHI

3 stars: Writing, maybe you can edit a little. Because some of the readers do not read in a PC or laptop and prefer to read it on the phone. Lack of space gap. Sometimes it's disturbing (Sorry, it's my opinion). Grammars it's alright. I don't know much about it well, but I can read it overall. And your quotation, it's pretty rare for novel use that style. Maybe you can use a common one? "..." 4 stars: Updates. Because it's still a short chapter so. 4 stars: Story. Still in progressing. Because I don't know her true purpose and her goals. I will give you this for now. The way you portray the story is great, keep going with it. 5 stars: Character. Well, not a personality that I like the most. But I like how you describe your character in it. Just like Alice brother, Pete. 5 stars: World background. Just like I told you, I like how you put much detail in your novel. A compelling novel with a lot of detail in it. You could mesmerize by the characters actions and her surroundings. Personally, this is a good novel and I can understand how the writer conveys the story. Good job, keep going, author! :D