Finally a good western medieval fantasy story without a system! Also, the MC has it very hard until now, so you can’t call it ‚wish-fullfilment‘ either. Wrting quality: Very good, no spelling or grammar mistakes as far as I can tell. Stability of updates: Once per day until now. Chapter length is also good, considering that the author doesn’t get paid for this. Story development and World background: The author doesn’t seem to tell the readers everything at once, but is only giving hints until now. But considering the content of those hints, they seem to become relevant as the story goes on and not directly from the beginning. Thats why the immediate story development is a little unclear, although it seems like the MC has to survive living on the street for the time being. Character design: Seems good for now? I can’t find any inconsistencies. Conclusion: It’s definitely worth taking the time and read it.
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