Review Detail of MystenNoire in 88887796799

This is a really interesting story and is written very well. The story itself has great pacing and the mix between suspense and complaisant comedy is wonderful. I look forward to more every time I read a chapter. Since the updates are quite stable, there's no need to bite my nails and wait weeks for another chapter like a certain different novel (*ahem*anyone reads Versatile Mage {the novel} too?*ahem*). There are 12 main characters which can make things more confusing as each name just seems foreign (especially since the lesser that a character talk or appears, the harder it is to remember them) when they come up. The characters themselves are actually really diverse and distinct in their own way but they can get slowly forgotten since not all of them get a lot of screen time. Heck, Layla talks less than Ialantha did (you'll understand when you read up to the Elf Arc). My suggestion for the characters, make a list somewhere so that the readers can be reminded of what and who is this and that. Like, it took me some time to remember who Layla is when her name was mentioned (chapter 29? 30? Forgot which) until the previous description comes to mind and I knew she was the ******** (gotta censor to keep it spoiler free). A list, maybe in an auxiliary chapter or in the end of a chapter can help at least a bit. It's not necessary though since the readers will eventually just remember and get used to everything but it will certainly be easier for new (or returning) readers. The world is well made with clear distinctions whuch in turn makes it feel all the more real. "The humans are here, beasts are there, demons over there and there," makes all the difference compared to a more reckless world building like "humans are in the village, merman in the sea, demons outside the continent and elves in a forest" since there's a mental map that a reader can place regions on unlike the second example. Great work on that btw, not a lot of authors put enough distinction between regions when world building after all. All in all, good story, lots of interesting characters, great world building and stable updates. Worth reading especially if you're patient enough to follow the author's writing until the end. Also props on the great author-reader interactions in the comments. Makes you feel closer to the person who created this wonderful story. ^w^