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ChryissLv55yrChryiss

Read this off my mobile and finished chapter 11. Your writing is good! It’s polished and has nice descriptions of the world. The plot keeps moving, so it’s keeps me on my toes. My only real qualm is there too many characters are introduced in the beginning. Building up the party slower one at a time would be easier for me to keep track of whose who. On another note, their interactions remind my slightly of Harry Potters gang lol. Also, Altwidus is an awesome name haha! Will read more later in the morn. :)

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ChryissLv5Chryiss

Somehow the ‘are’ ended up in between characters and introduced. It should be ‘there are too many.’ :p

5yr

90751052Author90751052

Oh, since I'm planning on 100+ characters, I'm slowly going through the characters. It might be hard to remember the characters in the beginning, but I make sure to refer to them by their race and full names whenever I can in the future chapters. Thanks for reading! >3</

5yr

90751052Author90751052

Also, while I do know that 11 is a lot, I originally wanted 15 girls! I dreamt of a boy with 15 girls on New Years, which led to the creation of this book lol. Alas, 15 wasn't realistic. >3</

5yr

ChryissLv5Chryiss

100+ characters and what would’ve been 15 girls! @.@ Omg, good luck on that feat!

5yr