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Review Detail of Denzel_theking in The Prince Hidden in the Shadows- Fanfic

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Denzel_theking
Denzel_thekingLv65yrDenzel_theking

What I feel about this story well for one this was the biggest waste of time in my life the story’s boring with a pathetic Mc that leaves much to be desired I believed it would have been better to instead of genius have normal as a perfect description of him and even that would be a lie cause he is much worse

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The Prince Hidden in the Shadows- Fanfic

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CrossArk
CrossArkAuthorCrossArk

How? Just asking, because I’m curious.(I am the author)

LuxVonDeux
LuxVonDeuxLv5LuxVonDeux

Aye, this is just Harry Potter with different MC all of the plot is still the same

Hokonoso
HokonosoLv13Hokonoso

OC fanfiction only works if the OC has foreknowledge otherwise why bother? Just write about Harry with a slight AU to the setting.

OfficallyxSad
OfficallyxSadLv1OfficallyxSad

this is false many stories have a good OC because of the fact they are adding a new characters with new abilities with Harry as the leash on to the story

Hokonoso:OC fanfiction only works if the OC has foreknowledge otherwise why bother? Just write about Harry with a slight AU to the setting.
Hokonoso
HokonosoLv13Hokonoso

everyone has their own opinion but over the many stories ive read on fanfiction dot net for hp i'd say ive read all the stories there where the MC is a male and isn't slash and can tell you i can't rememeber a single one where the OC didn't know canon and was a great story... now maybe i missed one or two but i've read at least 20-30k stories of this type there as i do nothing but read and i can't rememeber a single one that is this type and is good... pls pls point me to exceptions if you know of any!

OfficallyxSad:this is false many stories have a good OC because of the fact they are adding a new characters with new abilities with Harry as the leash on to the story
striker_saiyan
striker_saiyanLv4striker_saiyan

the fact that mc doesn't know to plot makes it awesome