Man i love the way that the character fells alive and not some sort of puppets at your mercy . The story have good pace ,but you must retain the unicness of the characters, the implementacion of diferenta elements must dont distort the universe that you are molding into a mess of aberrations .The details and emotions of the character make this fac fic truly great.
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