Just saying this first the ending was emotional and got me to tear up a little bit, now onto the negative I think that the Mc when he said “He was not going to train his body and only his aura and chakra” is complete idiocy since Madara didn’t get where he was just by training chakra when I read this I was shout out this fucking idiot so many times I lost so I continued reading from that stupid paragraph overall was a good chap I guess
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