Review Detail of Doomey in RWBY - Fall of Grimm

I like the idea of this novel but this has a lot of things that madara uchiha wouldnt do like telling someone his abilities especially with knowing everything in rwby he just wouldnt give information out like that I also dont like the fact that he barely uses his eye and he loses it like cmon the eye powers are op and even with just the powers he had unlocked he should be using that fighting experience madara has its almost like he has the power of madara but not the life experience or will not even the skill. My main point is if your gonna use Madara in a fanfic he should be ******** and selfish he did try to take over the world on top of that he basically did it alone he had no allies just pawns.