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DabanCrow
DabanCrowAuthor5yr
2019-02-10 15:13

Did I forget to self review? Yes, yes I did... Though I call my work nothing short of a masterpiece in the making. I’m not making any money from this and I might have to get an actual job soon and only get the chance to really get into making chapters on the weekends. So yeah. Also, you guys ever have something to tell me. Just hit me up here! Or on the Facebook I made at... Daban Crow! Yeah just DM or something. I don’t really post things.

RWBY - Fall of Grimm

DabanCrow
4.3
64 Chs

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Heaveah
HeaveahLv5

Harem?😍

5yr
DabanCrow
DabanCrowAuthor

Don’t mind me~ Just the author~!

5yr
DabanCrow
DabanCrowAuthor

Throw app literally just recommended me to read my own original work... That’s how I know I’ve leveled up.

5yr
Nickaido
NickaidoLv4

Harem?

4yr
DabanCrow
DabanCrowAuthor

Here I am, two years later... I wish i was better than this... But i’m not.

3yr
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Leylin_Farlier1996
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Reveal spoiler

5yr

Reaper2504
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Reveal spoiler

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Melshan
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KingGrizzly
KingGrizzlyLv10

Pretty good in my opinion. It actually doesn't focus on the start of RWBY but more on his childhood and such with Ruby and Yang. Which is new to me as most authors that do an RWBY fanfic kinda skip childhood using their author powers and focus on the start of the story and let me tell ya, the author did a pretty good job on creating new scenarios and such without relying on the canon storyline, it's very interesting. Some of the problems that I have with writing is that the author combined multiple worlds together without stating why, how, it just happened. Like one chapter Revy from black lagoon showed up in child form and some gangsters are Doflamingo, Aizen, Obito, and Blackbeard. It wasn't explained how or why they all just showed up, I actually left it to rot because of how dumb that is to combine anime worlds. Like the power, levels would all be messed up and stuff as some people are actually restricted (Aizen with the fact that he cannot use his full power in the human world, they made the devil fruits disappear from the user and now they have to find them again.)

5yr
Asdf213
Asdf213Lv4

Man i love the way that the character fells alive and not some sort of puppets at your mercy . The story have good pace ,but you must retain the unicness of the characters, the implementacion of diferenta elements must dont distort the universe that you are molding into a mess of aberrations .The details and emotions of the character make this fac fic truly great.

5yr
Faveryy
FaveryyLv13

I don't usually take the time to review the novels I've read, but I feel this one deserves one It's honestly great, I don't read that many RWBY fanfictions, but this one is wonderfully done, and combined with the Naruto aspect, it's 100x better Nice job, and good luck writing!

5yr
TheCheshireJoke
TheCheshireJokeLv11

Why not give him shadow manipulation, he is a Shinobi so it makes sense to give him something that compliment his characteristics.ssssssssss

5yr
SUGARBOI
SUGARBOILv5

I think this is a good story, with some good and decent writing, that also have a very fresh and slow start, instead of the classic "3 chapters in super timeskip" where the author just skips to the main plot, and dont think much about the character development. Great job so far fam. ""Me nOt gOod At englsih, mE SorRy iF aNy misTaKes.

5yr
Rickhardyson
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