Review Detail of XOMatsumaeohana in To My Sunflower

Review Swap (Valid For Chapter 33) Writing Quality: The writing quality is beautiful. I tend to judge writing quality on grammar but another factor is the language usage. That's why I'm rating you 5 stars. Your able to portray the characters emotions beautifully, leading to making the story flow better. Good usage of paragraph spacing and description too, something people tend to overlook. Story Development: Maybe I'm a bit biased. But I like Japanese written stories a lot better 😅. So for me it was much easier to follow the story development. And a war BL story 😲 not something you find often on WN. The focus of this story is more like a letter - due to the perspective change. The story is seen from both the dual main characters perspective. Character Development: From chapter 1, we get an insight to how they first met, how it all started. The different thoughts and emotions behind their meeting. Hinata and Eiji to me are very similar to each other. 🤔 People who are desperate to find a place, meaning to their lives. A meeting that lead to changing their lives. Regarding other characters, no other characters other than Hinata and Eiji really stood out to me. World Background: I like the switch in POV. In my own stories I tend to swap perspectives a lot. With your story you only switched perspective for two characters, giving me an insight into the characters thoughts and allowing me to learn more about them. Actually 🤔 it feels like it's written like a letter. 😲hhh there's a lot of references to actual Japanese events. I'm glad the author did their research 👏 Overall: A rare written BL on WN and a very well written one too, I recommend this story for people who like this genre. Will definitely keep this in my library. (╥﹏╥) sorry for the delay, your story got burried with all the other review swaps I did before I went on holiday....