Review Detail of Erlking in The Sovereignty System

Agreed. I have no fOOkin idea why a bunch of ppl gives 4-5*

Yes I go around and put 1 star on trash over rated novels I don't know if I am ever going to make one or if it will be a masterpiece, but at least I ll make sure that I have some side characters on my novel before I criticize reviewers.

You're the one who is over the top. You think that writing a story makes you immune to criticism from readers. You are 20 plus chapters into your story and the only character you have is the MC. I saw your novel with a 4.7/5 stars and when I read your synopsis I thought it might be interesting. But, I am here after so long and the only thing I saw was a system log. I know that it's pretty rude to give you 1/5 but someone has to tell you to not be delusional because some mouth breathers give you 5 of 5. I really tried to like your novel but nothing is happening. Sorry for the 1 out of 5, but I simply can't give you more than that.

Agree mostly but it's not a system log from where I left off. I just think that the novel is ruined from this autowin idle hero system because theoretically, he's pretty much untouchable.

By your logic youre saying anyone hasnt written a book or story shouldnt be aloud to criticize yours... Whats your point again? Because i cant even find any of these replies creative and educational or interesting in the least bit sure one person doesnt like your book great reason to act like an ignorant child who cant handle one negative review, get over it, you have fans or people who gave good reviews whatever, just either ignore the comment and try to grow through some peoples suggestions who act more positive or try to take some harsh criticism say maybe this person is right about a few things and work to better yourself and your stories dont act like a good because you put a few words on paper.

i would also like to say that 1st any reader can say you get 1 star its trash that's their opinion 2nd if a book has people throwing out 4 and 5 on a book without thinking why it deserves that out of all the other books they have seen then those 4 and 5's are underserved also and a book that is really good wouldn't be that affected by these random 1 star 20 chaps people but if the book sucks then you won't see that many 4 and 5's and your star rating will easily drop below the 4 star mark into average or below also as a author just the fact that you responded to a reader that didnt like your book already makes it bad its like saying i read his crap i didnt like it rated it 1 star and author lost his crap on me dont think i ever want to read or comment on his crap again sense he acts like a child also when i rate stuff if translation quality and stability were out of the picture and all that was left was plot, character development and world building then books i read that were ok but did badly wouldn't even get 3 stars so easily not to mention has anyone on this site ever seen a translation with 2 or 1 stars overall like there are some trashy books yet i still see them at 3 stars

I get it if you don’t like it. But the review and rating should be based on the 5 things.

I've got no idea how this has gotten such good reviews... 4.6 stars is just crazy and makes the rating system useless on this site if storys like this can get it. At first I thought they must be bots but some of the people rating this are actually real.... Wtf..

It's better than letting ****ty novels like this sit at 5 stars while there's literally no story to be had here. I suppose you think everything which has ever been **** out of a beggining author is also a masterpiece? Take your useless opinions else where.

Yeah agree its defibetely not over 4 stars. A bit plain anf linear in some parts and often some nonsensical details that should make some things more realistic but speak more about no research for it. Also dumb or a bit more too ****** minded mc who doesnt use most resources right or acts too kind and trusting without reason. But meh story might have potential so i keep reading and see how it works out x) Only thing except the major points above which irritates me is that u could think the mc is a monk in some aspects oO

I anticipated this in chapter 5, he has all the advantage in a backward world where even the magic and ki is backward. though it say that you give it a 5 stars.

Who gave 5 stars?

I don't know if its my ignorance, but it shows 5 yellow stars in your review

No I definitely gave a 1 out of 5 in my review

Agreed. I was holding on in the hope that some dialogue would begin and the MC would have meaningful interactions with others. Seeing the guy first enslave the rescued group of slaves and guards just irked me. It told me that wherever complex situations would arise, the author would resolve the problem with a ****** magical trick. A hidden fortress in the middle of someone's kingdom? Enslave the populace to preserve your secret. 'Kill' of stronger individuals through plot mechanism so that everyone else is subservient. Story quickly became meaningless

Ok

godly systems are a no-no to me

Every commenter has the right to rate whatever book that want that is our jobs at readers to help the author notice if he left any mistakes lying around in his or her book but all of these comments are just hateful and barely helpful you just explain that you don’t like this book and why you don’t offer much help and even if you do from what I read it’s biased no side characters but really there are just not big side characters that please you I could go on but it’s not worth the typing I’m sorry but it’s not go read other books that please you and stop trying to convince others that this book isn’t worth the time of day because if you really read it you will see that the author adapted to reviews and is working with commenters on what could be better so please pis s off and have a pleasant day good sirs or madams :p

Oof k.

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