Review Detail of TromJH2424 in The Sovereignty System

Great novel! I am always searching for ones with the tags Kingdom Building and System, and this is the perfect one. For people that are hesitant on if they should read this or not, here is some information that may or may not persuade you. Firstly, even though in the first few chapters it’s just him walking to a city, nothing stupid and embarrassing happens to him, like him asking someone about something that is common knowledge and that person looks at him weirdly. It quickly gets into the Kingdom Building aspect of it just after, I think it was, chapter 4, 5? Grammar is also great with just a few small errors every chapter or so, nothing that disrupts the reading flow and it’s clearly understandable. So far, the author describes the layout of the buildings pretty well, though there could be a few more measurements or size comparisons to give you a better understanding. The one thing that I can see as being somewhat bad about this novel is that there is a large amount of skills that the MC learns really quickly. It isn’t to the point where it is overwhelming like in many other novels I have read, but I can see it getting tedious in later chapters having to scroll down the long list of skills that he gets. Overall, I feel that this novel has lots of potential and I hope the author doesn’t stop writing!!!