Item: In Death Mage as Troy Galadriel Rosvenor!?
Rating: 1
Author: 1st_crazy_king

1st_crazy_kingLv65yr

2019-01-21 14:04

It would be a good novel if the mc wasn’t such a little ***** and the parents don’t ever give a **** about there sun and he got raped by his girlfriend and his parents are now training her to make her stronger when she literally just killed there son the story nr is super f up and stupid you should probably rewrite it like if the mc didn’t get raped then killed bye his wife and also wasn’t a lil ***** and had parents that actually have a **** about him then it would be a good novel but now it just seems like a really really stupid person made this like it pisses me off from how stupid it is

In Death Mage as Troy Galadriel Rosvenor!?

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