Review Detail of 50ShadesOfAss in I Cant Miss !!!

This story is so random at times. But still good. I like it but sometimes I just want punch the mc for being such an idiot at times and the author for these cliche AF drama but I can’t seem to stop reading 😂 I pray you have him get back his ex. 🙏🏼👍🏽 It was pretty stupid how they broke up , how he didn’t get mad at a women who trapped him and caused him to break up with his girl. Pretty dumb in my opinion and how his ex decided to break up with him for something that’s not his fault . Even her parents told her to give him a chance 😂 It’s also really annoying when he can’t control his dick and NOT cheat on his girl. “I love Sansha but f*ck this girl is so cute , I can’t seem to resist her” is the type of shit he be saying I wish you had more dialogue with the characters and have them show more emotion . Seems super bland. Like people’s reactions to Eazy and what he does. No one seems surprised that he’s doing super well at almost every highschool sport ? No one is gossiping about how him and his ex broke up? Anyways , stop I’m definitely putting it in my library