Review Detail of The_God_Asura in Natsu The Supreme Overlord

Item: Natsu The Supreme Overlord
Rating: 5

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The_God_AsuraAuthor5yrThe_God_Asura

I'm just reviewing my story, if you want a Dark Natsu and a harem, you'll like this story, my language is not English so I'm sorry if the grammar gets bad, I'm trying to improve

Natsu The Supreme Overlord

The_God_Asura

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Replies9

JakeWJElliottLv4JakeWJElliott

Make it so he doesn't forgive Erza, Lucy, Gray etc... And instead he nearly kills them but he still cool with Mira n ****. Maybe make it so Erza, Lucy n Gray all get kicked out the guild or something

5yr

LelouchViBrittaniaLv13LelouchViBrittania

No man I believe Erza should be forgiven after all she didn't do anything to bad. She just said he was ***** which he was.

JakeWJElliott:Make it so he doesn't forgive Erza, Lucy, Gray etc... And instead he nearly kills them but he still cool with Mira n ****. Maybe make it so Erza, Lucy n Gray all get kicked out the guild or something

5yr

FvkYouBoyLv4FvkYouBoy

I wish he quits guild then let mira and juvia follows him. Make it mira is V and Juvia

5yr

FvkYouBoyLv4FvkYouBoy

Natsu dont need a scrap hahaha

5yr

MelshanLv7Melshan

Harém 😍😍

5yr

EdwinTrLv11EdwinTr

Aight

5yr

WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv11WN_grdy_mthr_fker

dude you not only turned natsu dark... you ruined the total characters of every one ... still i have just read 7 chapters.. 1 positive is i like the idea of mc of one universe goes to another being op.....

5yr

Sadman979Lv4Sadman979

Op natsu is the best.Harem is bestest.

5yr

InternetDaiiiLv4InternetDaiii

Whats the original story

3yr