Review Detail of FlamingWolf0 in The Strongest Beast Tamer
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Obviously, have to be shameless and give my novel 5 stars. This novel is my take on stories such as Monster Pet Evolution, Pokemon and all those types of stories. I believe I have a good idea for the story and have plotted the first arc already (it'll only be 4 - 5 chapters). I'll easily be able to plot out the rest of the arcs, mainly cause I've had this idea for a while and have constantly improved and changed it I do hope you enjoy reading it and aren't to fuss about my English.
The Strongest Beast Tamer
FlamingWolf0
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Could you fix the chapters so that his age is correct then. In chapter one or two he’s 15, then later when he sees his status the second time he’s 14, here you say he’s 10
FlamingWolf0:NOOOOO, of course it isn't my boi is 10 years old.
The chapters with the stars next to them are being updated. Also, the character was 10 years old at the start, but I've been going back and changing his age to suit his train of thought better. Also, I'm currently going through a stage of just completely editing the story, changing a lot. So if you keep on reading then it won't match properly.
Pyrozian:Could you fix the chapters so that his age is correct then. In chapter one or two he’s 15, then later when he sees his status the second time he’s 14, here you say he’s 10
Author, are you coming back to write some more? Your Beast Taming LN is one of the best I have read so far. If more people were to know about it you would have a lot more readers. You should try posting this on reddit and anywhere else that would draw people to try it out. Once they try it I really believe many of them will stick around and keep reading. You are quite a good writer! Keep up the great work :-)
Hi, Author. I know you already dropped this novel because of how tedious the stats are. If ever you want to continue this or write a new novel maybe you can get an inspiration from the novel Lord Shadow. The stats were basically only in the beginning of the novel or during low level phase. From plain stat of 'Strength' to 'pillar of strength' and is determined by height instead so you won't be stressed by the numbers. That's all I have to say. You're novel will be missed.