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Tsubasa93
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2020-01-15 01:52

This novel is going down the drain. Lazy writing and copy pasting has taken over what once was a very interesting novel. That along with the author forgetting his own events that have happened and revealing information to surprised characters that have heard this information more than 600 chapters ago, makes this one very disappointing novel.

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Andylovescandy
AndylovescandyLv4

Writing Quality: 2 star = The grammar is very messy, it feels like I am reading a novel from lmntl, but its more confusing. Its still understandable to say the least so 2 stars. Stability of Updates: 5 star = Author keeps releasing a lot of chapters which is nice. Story development: 1 star = I have read the author works before and I realized that he keeps wanting to push this novel in the same direction as Hitose note, which was way better than this. The only difference is, some new anime like Detective conan is added and instead of taking Raku's place author went for his brother. The relationships are awkward, I get that, its the type of novel were MC is great and every girls keeps falling for our MC but this is the same place where the author fails and makes this novel worse than Hitose note or any other novel he wrote before. The girls keep falling for MC but Author keeps cock blocking himself, even though we all know that he will have s*x with the girl a chapter later on. Character design: 1 star: Even though the characters are from other animes, author fails to maintain the character's behaviors even though he doesn't have to think about any of them. (I know its hard to write and bla bla bla... but these characters already exist in other works, so its just copying the character's characteristics but author still fails to do so.) Let's leave the other character's for now, but the author can't decide even on the MC characteristics. Sometimes he is dense, sometimes he is way to clever and flirty, sometimes he is a gentleman but other time is a creepy pervert. He keeps acting like every girl belongs to him even though sometimes he keeps stopping himself from getting them. Like make your mind, do you want them or not. And the characters, Every chapter at least 5 new characters are introduced and every one of them sounds and acts like a harem candidate, By the count of it, MC is fu*king every women in his town. I am on chapter 58 right now and I lost count of how many girls there are by the 10th chapter. World Background: 2 Star = The world is very confusing since a lot of different anime's are cramped into one place. But props to the author for trying but it could be done better. Conclusion: I am not hating on author or his work like I said, I liked his previous novel before but I am quite disappointed since instead of improving he went downhill from what he created. If you want to read this novel keep in mind that its not going to be sophisticated in the very least. Its like a very plain ****** novel written by a hyped up author, who wants to make his novel good but it turns out bad. It's not that bad like some novels in this site but its not good either. If you want to binge read something due to you having a lot of free time, go ahead and read this novel. I suggest author to focus on making a single chapter perfect than releasing 10 in a day. Quality over Quantity.

True_Equality
True_EqualityLv3

It was good at first, but the MC becomes progressively more scummy. Like honestly at first he seemed like an okay dude, then it seemed like the author just decided to throw all that out the window and replace his whole personality. It's REALLY odd because he seems to relapse back into this persona with a drop of a hat. It started around when the MC was smoking with Eriri in the room. I mean, dude, not cool. He was also being a prick by essentially telling her to just deal with it. From that point on he turns into some 'tough guy' but then lapses back into his gentleman persona whenever he meets a girl that has zero compatibility with said personality. Like for instance he meets Nishimiya Shouko(poor girl) and all of a sudden he's back to his pure and fawning over cute things persona even going so far as to sign "Will you be my friend?". At that point I was pretty frustrated but since I already invested some time I decided to just charge through until I could go no further. I kept on reading until the time he has a one-night stand with Valmet and I just could not continue. The biggest problem I have with this is that he got all pissed off at Ranko for literally throwing herself at him calling her and I quote, "a cheap girl". Then he does this around 10 chapters later? Fucking hypocrisy at it's finest. I would also like to mention that this MC has girls that would willing join a harem for him yet he decides he would be okay with prostitutes while in Dubai. Like seriously, THE FUCK. I am being incredibly generous still giving this a three. The only reason I did is because of the sheer amount of different fandoms this author included and the fact I can recognize every single one. Also, Avalon doesn't work as described here. I have a lot more I could say, but **** it. I am done.

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