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Mbenshleh
MbenshlehLv124yr
2020-10-21 04:04

The story could be better written. there’s a lot of grammatical errors. Character development is a bit slow. The plot of the story is good. Should the the story be better written, it would definitely be interesting enough to keep you interested until the end

The Commoner Consort: The Country's Respected Empress

Hateera
4.3
268 Chs

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Hateera
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Thank you

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Quincy_Alde
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Gonna give this story a perfect 5 stars rate because the sypnosis and earlier chapters are great. Hope that it will keep me hook.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😄😄😊

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Stupidity_Queen
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So far so good. Update please. I like the characters so much specially the main female character. Not showy but witty. Looking forward for the next chapter ❤️❤️

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mulann
mulannLv4

I wish the next chapter would upload soon ....eagerly waiting..... whats going to happen next......did she realy become crown prince beloved wife😞😞or she end up being commoner.... and what that curse is... it look likes she had some super power.. according to me the both main characters are fated not becozz of royal decree but becozz of curse ....i love💕💕💕💕 the suspence... waiting for new chapters☺☺☺☺☺☺

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rskdrama
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after 226 chapters - this is a well thought out story. for the first time it has India as part of the story. We don't see dusky girls or Indian in WN. Added to this the storyline is quite nice. I am looking for further updates.

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rskdrama
rskdramaLv6

well, am upto date on the chapters so far. what's killing is slow updates. like this time, 2 chapters were updated, and then nothing for 2 weeks. now the page says 0 chapters per week. is this story abandoned? 1. regular updates keeps story flow 2. irregular updates means reader has to go back to read a few chapters before coming to the current one 3. irregular updates means readers lose interest, author loses loyal readers 4. plots become choppy with irregular updates. 5. chapters are also so short that it doesn't give any essence for the wait.

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adewil3
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Shivani_8030
Shivani_8030Lv2

This plot is nice...... but dear author please update more chapters......we all readers are eagerly waiting for them........ other than this.....why don't you reveal something about the relationship between cursed soul.... I really want to know the background of both of maya and Xander.

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bpires
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This novel keeps me wanting more to read as the days pass by. It's a lovely story. The author has done a great job with the way the story goes forward. 💕💕💕💕💕💕

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Grace_sunshine
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The story is quite different from the normal trend of WEBNOVEL, has a pinch of suspense and slice of sweetness. It's highly recommendable to those that love inter-tribal marriage and love triangle😍😍😍

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