Review Detail of BlueRhapsody in Transition and Restart

Item: Transition and Restart
Rating: 4.8

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BlueRhapsodyLv55yrBlueRhapsody

Part of a review swap: My first impressions are: Clean and advanced writing. Characters each have distinct personalities. Well planned out plot line. Beginning is a bit lackluster, I found it but difficult to continue reading. Over all a cute story about Japanese students. Slice of life: this is not a genre for for everyone, better for older audiences.

Transition and Restart

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Thanks! And yep, I might have started out the slice-of-lifey part too early (meaning slow as hell to read from the beginning), but at the other hand I'm afraid it would be a little like cheating if the story suddenly slowed down, and I REALLY wanted to write slice of life.

5yr

BlueRhapsodyLv5BlueRhapsody

Well, there isn’t too much Slice of Life and Japanese style, props for being original. Good luck on your novel!

StenDuring:Thanks! And yep, I might have started out the slice-of-lifey part too early (meaning slow as hell to read from the beginning), but at the other hand I'm afraid it would be a little like cheating if the story suddenly slowed down, and I REALLY wanted to write slice of life.

5yr