Review Detail of chonnie in Transition and Restart

This review is part of a review swap. Hopefully this can help you in your writing! I was interested in the story, but never fully invested. I think I had a hard time comprehending the switching between worlds. I had to go back and forth between chapters to reference things. Overall, the novel is not bad. It just wasn't my cup of tea because its not in the genre I'm fond of. If you're into a slice of life, modern setting high school novel, you'll definitely like this (for reference, i like fantasy books set in the olden days)! Stars ° Writing: 4 There were times I felt like the writing was a little too 'frugal,' then there were times I felt like it was too much. Don't get me wrong, this is a standout in terms of quality compared to other books. However, there were times that I wanted a little bit more detail to paint a better picture. Not necessarily to tell me everything, because the author is clearly trying to add a level of mystery to everything, but to understand enough to feel. This ties into CD which I'll go into next. CD: 4 They were there and they made me laugh, but I didn't feel very connected to them. Maybe if I had read a few more chapters, but as of right now I feel like there was a more tell than show when it came to the characters. Their personalities were fairly distinct, so I had no real issue on remembering who was who. There was definitely a feeling of the developing bond between all of them. SOU: 5 No issues here. I just added it into my library a few days ago and I've seen it update a few times already. Good job! SD: 4 The way the story was introduced was interesting. The confusion when reading the beginning definitely adds a certain level of interest. Switching back and forth between time periods was good at keeping a sort of 'suspense' (thats not the word i want to use but ive been thinking for about 5 minutes now and i cant find the right word). WB: 5 Confusing as it may be, I was interested. I wanted to know what was going on and that to me made the world much more valuable. I'll be binge reading from time to time because I want to understand the elements of the worlds and how things got from point A to point B. I hope this helped you in some way. Thank you for helping me!!