Review Detail of BaiQiuyue in Transition and Restart

Transition and Restart, a very intriguing concept described in various ways. Although this novel is under romance, I think it would fare better and show it's true potential under a different genre. Maybe magical realism or Sci-fi? As you've noticed, the audience for romance fiction on webnovel leans more towards female lead cultivators, reincarnation for revenge and love between a CEO and entertainer. For example, for manga, this story would probably be published under shounen romance, rather than shoujo romance. The plot is, as most readers stated, a little confusing to follow at first. But this isn't a big deal as long as you catch the reader's attention. Which you did very well in chapter 1. This makes a reader curious in wanting to know what happens next and compels them to read further. And the further they go, the more the reader comprehends. There are many published novels who have a rough start but slowly gains a large reader base when things pick up. The characters are well fleshed out. You have a good way of connecting a reader to the character, which is something I always look for in a novel. Their dialogue, actions and the details that accompany them have a reason to it. But, I recommend adding a brief definition of Japanese terms for readers who do not know them. Your writing style is unique, but sometimes the dialogue can be a bit 'stiff' when a character tries to explain things. I noticed this mostly at the beginning. Maybe this is why the story is confusing at first. I do enjoy the rhythm and pace of the story. It has a proper mix of short and long sentences, as well as a good balance of text and dialogue. Overall, I enjoyed reading up to Chapter 31, but as I pointed out earlier, this will do really well under a different genre.