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Xincerely
XincerelyLv135yrXincerely

Very interesting story so far, will definitely continue to read on! The writing style was a bit confusing for me, especially the first chapter's dialogues -- I had to reread it a couple of times to understand what they were saying. But after a few more chapters, I slowly became adapted to the reading! I love the inner monologue and the fact that the readers get a glimpse on what the characters are thinking, I think it makes us connect to them a lot more! :D The character designs was also phenomenal and really great, each of them has their own unique sense of personality! The updates are very stable (a lot of chapters and its only the first month!) so kudos to you, author-san! ^~^ Definitely adding this to my library~

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Transition and Restart

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Thanks. I'm aware the start is confusing. I'm at a loss as for how to fix it since I run with an ensemble cast and have chosen a plot-device that kind of lends itself to confusing :D

Xincerely
XincerelyLv13Xincerely

Haha it’s only a bit confusing in the beginning, but after a few more chapters, it becomes clearer! ^~^

StenDuring:Thanks. I'm aware the start is confusing. I'm at a loss as for how to fix it since I run with an ensemble cast and have chosen a plot-device that kind of lends itself to confusing :D