Review Detail of yoursexypotato in Transition and Restart

The story is nice! I'm still on chapter 11, but I'm already trying to anticipate what's about to happen. I like the essence of the story where you're always thinking. The characters are well written. I also like the fact that you are always aware about their thoughts. It gives them more life. I do suggest that you try to elaborate the facial features of the MAIN characters early on so that your reads could easily visualize them. It's kind of hazy to me. Don't rely too much on the reader's familiarity with a character's race or something. At first it was quite confusing, but you'll get the hang of it after some time. I'll keep on reading! Thanks author! I hope this helps you, author. I'm not an expert, though.