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Wow! This story is pretty good! Although the beginning was pretty confusing in terms of the transit and subjective and objective ages, as the story progresses, it smoothed out. The writing quality is superb, so too the character design. Urufu has caught my interest :) Story development is good, I've never seen a story like this before, the plot is so interesting and unique! The world background is where the confusion is in the earlier chapters but as I said, as the story progresses it gets clearer. Although, just a suggestion, whenever you're switching from the different Earths, give us a heads up like [Earth 2] or [Earth 3]. Something like that would've been helpful especially in the earlier chapters. But this is a story worth the read and a few stones.

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Gotta fix that confusion thingie :D Especially since everything apart from the very first chap with Nakagawa sitting on that hillside happens in Earth 2. Well, Urufu is bound to refer to stuff from Earth 1 from time to time, given his background. Somehow I wonder if the 2040 chapters were a good idea (and they're set in Earth 2 as well), but, well, they're there now. Thanks for the review. I'll give the problem an extra run.