Review Detail of fantasy_land in Transition and Restart

Item: Transition and Restart
Rating: 5

Review detail

fantasy_landLv55yrfantasy_land

The writing style is great. Initially I had trouble understanding it, but after reading two three times, I became more acquainted with it. Also, would like to mention this is first kind of a novel I have read and highly impressed by it. The plot and character development is good, the way they transition and the talks just hooks the reader. 5 star for all. However, personally I think if you would change your cover to an anime one rather than a photograph, it would attract more readers. Just voicing my opinion. ** you have a new reader, that's me😃 Keep up the good work 👍

Transition and Restart

StenDuring

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StenDuringAuthorStenDuring

I know about the cover. It's originally envisioned as an LN series so a coloured manga-style cover makes sense. Now then there's the part of knowing someone who draws that stuff on a professional level for free. I don't ;)

5yr

fantasy_landLv5fantasy_land

There is a thread on the forum : Free covers for your stories by silentscarlett. Try requesting there, her covers are just wonderful and you would love it.

5yr

StenDuringAuthorStenDuring

Hmm, while nothing as fancy as getting an artist, I did apply a filter to the photo. Impressions?

fantasy_land:There is a thread on the forum : Free covers for your stories by silentscarlett. Try requesting there, her covers are just wonderful and you would love it.

5yr

fantasy_landLv5fantasy_land

Looks almost the same. You can keep this, until you find a better one. Choice is yours.

5yr

StenDuringAuthorStenDuring

Yep :D I will search, because I 100% agree that I probably lose readers immediately upon first contact with the current cover.

5yr

StenDuringAuthorStenDuring

Same bloody photo, but definitely looks different now :D Good or bad? I'm clueless. I suck at graphics.

fantasy_land:Looks almost the same. You can keep this, until you find a better one. Choice is yours.

5yr

fantasy_landLv5fantasy_land

Yup. This is definitely better than previous ones and looks attractive too👍

StenDuring:Same bloody photo, but definitely looks different now :D Good or bad? I'm clueless. I suck at graphics.

5yr