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StenDuring
StenDuringAuthor5yrStenDuring

This is a self-assesment, and it's based on the assumption that you, as a reader, aren't used to slice-of-life romance stories. I'm uploading an existing back-log, and the first 150K words or so are line-edited twice. If defining 'Writing Quality' as my mastery of the English language I dare assigning five stars here. Well, there was this back-log. As long as I'm happy with a daily update I can keep this story going for another year without writing a single word more. Make that a year and a half. So five stars (for that a year and a half). This is most definitely slice-of-life. I've become fond of the format, but for a lot of readers I have to admit it could feel like watching paint drying. For the slow pacing I'll assign three stars to my story. It does develop after all. The problem with multiple third person point of view stories is that personalities tend to bleed into each other unless you're a fantastic author. I try to keep my characters apart, but I'm nowhere close to being a fantastic author. I believe I'm fair enough though. So, a modest three stars. Placing the story in something extremely similar to an existing setting makes building world a lot easier. It's simply hard to go wrong. Since this one is based upon an archetypical type of manga/anime -kind of story there are certain tropes I follow. There are both benefits as well as drawbacks to doing this. All in all I feel confident in placing four stars here. So, all in all, a self-review from the author that runs at below average compared to the all five stars reviews here. This is my attempt at giving you an honest opinion of my own story.

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Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOLv7Gourmet_DAO

Novella first appears as fog, mirage, haze on bitter pavement. The reading, with each new chapter, the story slowly unfolding as a new road. New plots, old stories, fiction ... some silhouettes of secrets ... It looks like the movie "cats" - where only the game of shadows, and offscreen shouts, already create their images in the audience ... In general, I can say, as a reader and author, the novel is not simple, it is deeper than it seems at first glance, the novel is interesting and intriguing. Sweden! These are old images from childhood ... sometimes they are manifested in this novel ... This is Japan, an amazing country of fantasy and reality. Easy to read. Swedes know English, at the level of a native speaker. This is felt in the novel. Nice to read. I would put, 5 and 5, now, after reading the first 46 chapters ... and there we will see. Thanks to the author. What impresses that the author immediately told the truth about the novel, he did not mislead the readers. For which the author a separate respect!

LoveHarem
LoveHaremLv4LoveHarem

The MC Will have a girlfriend?

StenDuring
StenDuringAuthorStenDuring

Well, it's a **** high school romance, so, yeah ;)

LoveHarem:The MC Will have a girlfriend?
GoneAwayyyyy
GoneAwayyyyyLv2GoneAwayyyyy

Congrats on your 1M views! I admire your dedication to the story. Keep it up!

StenDuring
StenDuringAuthorStenDuring

Thanks :D

GoneAwayyyyy:Congrats on your 1M views! I admire your dedication to the story. Keep it up!