Review Detail of Ricardo_Nogueira in Chronicles of Abyssia

The writing is a little bit messy, but the story has a lot potential. It is interesting how this novel challenges the boundaries of what means to be in love, as the MC, Arias already liked that NPC even before she became sentient. A little tip that just might help. Try to write smaller and more concise paragraphs. This will help the reader not to get lost as he or she reads your texts.