Review Detail of redmitte2x in Chronicles of Abyssia

Cool story and a nice plot, I can give you that. My only issue are the grammatical errors found on almost every page, I highly suggest Grammarly to correct most of that or maybe a rewrite. Anyways, I was intrigued by the storyline, where MC decided that he wants to be among the NPC so he would be reunited with his lover, only to be utterly crushed, hehe. Just fix the grammar and it's a 5 for me.