Review Detail of BaeVida in Chronicles of Abyssia

Hmmmm, first of nice storyline, it is another gamin world and a future tale. The MC feels intrigued by the search of the blue flower and continues playing the game, but also because he fell in love with a NPC. Would like yo see how the novel progresses. Also author should work on the grammatical errors and update from time to time. You sure would get more reads and comments on your book that way. Good luck.