Review Detail of UnliMegane in The Chained Husband

Wild megane-ojisan appears! It used Review! It's super effective! Kidding aside, I'll try not to sound too harsh cause I understand this is your first work. This is a story about a very (un)fortunate arrogant (?) CEO who extremely adores his daughter, and is super tsundere towards his wife (lol). The chapters are quite short. The pace, however, is quite fast. Sometimes, a bit too fast - enough to leave the reader reeling. The grammar also needs some work. But I know English isn't your native language, so that can be forgiven lol. Also, I get a kick every time I read your suggestive leading questions at the end of the chapters lol. They're funny, but they can also undermine story immersion. All in all, a cute read. And I'm sure you're having a blast writing it. And if there are people who can share the joy with you, then so much the better :) Cheers!