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Review Detail of hawlol in A Slackers guide to Immortality

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hawlol
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MC is a coward and everyone else is an asshole. Couldn't really relate to any character as they were all unliakable. The whole atmosphere of the novel is of "trailer trash". Not only the MC but the sect and everyone in it as well. The sect is a dump. No problem if it was funny, but it's not, at least for me. Most of the humor is the MC getting pushed around for no reason. For the 14 chapters I've read there were no fantasy elements and it was mostly a muscled woman being a sadistic jerk to the MC in order to get back at his father. Read reviews from others to see if there's fantasy at all, since I didn't want to continue. A little too many grammar mistakes as well.

A Slackers guide to Immortality

SouthToiletWizard

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SouthToiletWizard
SouthToiletWizardAuthorSouthToiletWizard

Glad you enjoyed it enough to read 14 chapters.

hawlol
hawlolLv4hawlol

Please add some tags to your novel to help readers into knowing what to except. Wish you success!

SouthToiletWizard:Glad you enjoyed it enough to read 14 chapters.
SouthToiletWizard
SouthToiletWizardAuthorSouthToiletWizard

Expect. Sadly everytime I try to add tags from my phone doesnt work

looFehT
looFehTLv4looFehT

Now thats a lot of damage!

SouthToiletWizard:Expect. Sadly everytime I try to add tags from my phone doesnt work
SouthToiletWizard
SouthToiletWizardAuthorSouthToiletWizard

How did you know my phone is damaged? Lol

looFehT:Now thats a lot of damage!
looFehT
looFehTLv4looFehT

I know you :-) Nah just kidding, I typed it bc of your profile pic xD

SouthToiletWizard:How did you know my phone is damaged? Lol
SouthToiletWizard
SouthToiletWizardAuthorSouthToiletWizard

Flexseal for life

looFehT:Now thats a lot of damage!