Review Detail of Luna1777 in A Slackers guide to Immortality

Im so happy I didn't have to be the first one to write a review of my story!

Why 4 stars wuju? I can take criticsm if you can point out a flaw I can try to fix it but keep the story at its spirit.

It was the update schedules and there is some chapter you need to clean it up a bit. Like giving space or highlight the important line. (I didn't know to describe it). For personally, I read fast on my phone. So sometimes I missed little important details from the story. That's why I give you four stars.

So its an editing issue. I'll try to get to a library one day and just run the whole story through Word that might help clean it up alot

Updates are sporadic but there's a chapter every couple of days so I don't know how I can try to fix that.

I got a cover now wuju. You also seem to have a fan club developing around young 3 to manage lol

Nice2 lol😍👌

Wuju you got discord? SouthToiletWizard#9608 that's my tag

I have, but I rarely open it, I messaged you, just check it there.