Review Detail of aWarmBlanket in Rise of the Void : The Fallen

Hi! aWarmBlanket here. I will shamelessly give this a Full 5 stars for my first work to be officially published. I have been working on the plot for more than 7 years but only recently decided to begin officially start my writing due to my girlfriends' persuasion. I would upload at least a chapter a day and depend on popularity an increase would occur. I hope Everyone enjoys it! Please give me your honest opinion good or bad I will be sure to improve on it. Thank you