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Yoo it goes from him getting one contract to like 5 and the story development is too fast slow down it's not enjoyable to get rushed through a story, regardless of this it had a great potential and I do like the Goldfinger aspect but we could already tell that the doctor did it I mean susp and they don't try to hide who made to you gotta slow the amount of information it makes it more mysterious like 'Monster Pet Evolution' you don't know how he got the ability until the end it makes the mystery behind it more exciting and the story is devoid of emotion it's flat. Also the fact that the work backstory came from a television show what a cliche at least let show us going to this school and learning the past it's like the tv is a teacher. ( Btw what's with using the fucking pacarana or meganeura I don't know most of this **** and had to google the names just say illusion fat tailed gerbil like this ain't science class.

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Catch monster, Raise monster, Evolve monster? nope! lets fuse them! idgaf!

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