Review Detail of Chryiss in Crimson Love(BL)

The writing has frequent punctuation and spacing errors but nothing a little proofreading can’t fix easily. It feels like Mark and Akio’s relationship was rushed somewhat in the beginning and then put on a standstill during Wang Xiu’s case. Perhaps if it was built up more slowly throughout the solving of her case, it would be more believable. I’m not quite getting the horror and thriller feel of the genre yet, but I can see it progressively getting there. What ruined the suspense for me, however, were the questions at the end of each chapter. It totally broke the story immersion for me because those questions are naturally asked by the readers themselves at the end. It’s redundant to ask such obvious questions. Besides this, I enjoyed the story! I like how Mark is half-Indian because most MCs on here are Chinese. Good job, keep it up!