Review Detail of Luna1777 in Crimson Love(BL)

I originally wanted to read it until 20 chapters, but then I realized I finished it until the end hahaha. I'm half into BL genre, but I didn't hate it so I'll give you a great job for the story. The writing quality would be more awesome if you add some more detail on it. Like how his reaction or how he felt. There were misspelling words or grammars too that need to be fixed and some cleanup. Well, who am I to judge? I'm not an English speaker and when I wrote my novel, I have a lot of mistakes as well XD. Anyway, good job for the story! I'll try to read your new story again in the future ;)