Review Detail of _Miyasaka in White Moonlight System

Overall good plot and development, I read all 66 chapters in one go and enjoyed myself. There's an adequate mix of romance and comedy However, small grammar mistakes, consistency (shows lack of attention when writing), and even math errors (100+800 is not 950) make the novel way more difficult to read than it should be for attentive readers. I recommend proofreading before posting as some of these were glaring and shouldn't even make it to an actual update. World background needs some work, we have barely any idea of what the city is supposed to look like before the end of Vol.1. That doesn't do much damage, because you correct it rather early, but its something you should keep an eye on.