Review Detail of Chryiss in Cross Worlds: The Tale of Two Boys who swapped worlds

Really great writing! I like how they swapped but the two worlds are affected by one another. I’d like a ring that can store things too! The characters personality shine quite well, and the descriptions are good. The settings are pretty easy to follow, and there’s some nice comedy in here too. This is a nice spin on the other world theme. The only suggestion I have is to make the chapters shorter. They’re easier to digest while on a mobile device, and it allows us to remember parts we like so we can comment. Also, it’ll allow you to “update more often,” so that might reduce the upload frequently stress of writers.