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jesuslovesmeAuthor6yr
2019-02-18 01:03

I like the story. It's about a little girl who lost her parents and adopted by lily and Jacob. Her big brother Yuan who will do anything to make his little sister smile, to protect his little sister he mastered martial arts, sword fighting, horse riding and archery in young age and secretly only his sister knows about it. Such a loving and doting and protective big brother little rose have. Well I am the writer of the story though I don't know how to compose the story to your liking of the readers, I like the story. Mm that's enough for me I think.

Journey of life(UNFATHOMABLE LOVE )

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Hmm I like the story. Now it may lack of story development but I think I will learn how to make real interesting story soon. Well I have been working on the story short 😅😅😅😧😨😵😌🤗 This is my first story don't mind.

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