Review Detail of Santy_Melay in Reborn In The Three Kingdoms
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There are verbs in the present that should be in the past, I even saw verbs in the past that should be in the present, some words are also missing which makes it difficult to read, the fact that the nouns go before the dialogue makes it uncomfortable to read since It looks like a chat conversation and not like people speaking orally, the narrative style sucks because it seems like you're giving me a summary, there are still a lot of things to improve.
Reborn In The Three Kingdoms
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You know it's better to show where it's wrong like in this chapter these words blah blah than just says these verbs are wrong, and the past and present verbs are in the wrong position, I don't even care about the past or present verb as long as it is readable, you also have to remember English is not the Author 2nd language Also when you say the narrative sucks and like giving a summary, from where it's like a summary( maybe I'm wrong as I don't feel that way) At the end of the day, this is not an objective review but a subjective one and I can see from the way you review and comments on the other novels with the language you use Thank you for reading my rant
