I love how easy to follow the story is. The fluent and calm atmosphere allows you to better grasp what is happening while still remembering what sort of environment is caused. Although the grammar needs some minor tweaks, thevstory will grasp the full attention of the reader. As for how the story goes, it keeps giving of a mysterious vibe as you progress, encouraging you to keep going in order to solve what questions have been given. The frequent updates are also a good reminder that the author really loves what he/she is doing. Keep up the good work author! :)
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