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mrivera
mriveraLv135yr
2019-12-13 16:58

Your story is interesting but due to the updates far in between and one chapter at a time, it gets tedious to read. The flow has become monotonous. Where is the excitement that was promising in the beginning.

EMPEROR AND I

Sunset_Vermont
4.6
95 Chs

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Sunset_Vermont
Sunset_VermontAuthor

Hey, thank you for the review. I actually updated here quite frequently than on wattpad. If you can't bear the length of time you could stop reading for a while so there is stockpiling. But if the problem is where the plot is heading then it is alright to drop it as a novel. I wouldn't like you to read something you don't like. ❤️😘🙏

5yr
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mrivera
mriveraLv13

Dont take it to heart. Merely a figure of speech. Nothing wrong with your story. You are doing well and i wont reach this chapter if its not a good story. Each time I was just on the look out as to when the FL will finally accomplishes her mission. But the time seems to drag on plus the gap of posting takes a few days. So i find the waiting tedious. I apologize🙏. I meant no offense.

Sunset_Vermont:Hey, thank you for the review. I actually updated here quite frequently than on wattpad. If you can't bear the length of time you could stop reading for a while so there is stockpiling. But if the problem is where the plot is heading then it is alright to drop it as a novel. I wouldn't like you to read something you don't like. ❤️😘🙏
5yr
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Sunset_Vermont
Sunset_VermontAuthor

I understand. We all want to see her as empress, reaching the goal. But also take note that this is like a 3 volume book 1 is foundation So that's why it is a lot of info here and there but it will get better, as I develop as a writer and as the story picks momentum. But most of all thank you for the review I'm always happy to receive all thoughts Whether negative or not as it helps make the story better for you all It's difficult for one to see their mistakes

mrivera:Dont take it to heart. Merely a figure of speech. Nothing wrong with your story. You are doing well and i wont reach this chapter if its not a good story. Each time I was just on the look out as to when the FL will finally accomplishes her mission. But the time seems to drag on plus the gap of posting takes a few days. So i find the waiting tedious. I apologize🙏. I meant no offense.
5yr
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Sunset_Vermont
Sunset_VermontAuthor

Your figure of speech has pricked me at first but indeed now I can improve 👍😁❤️😘

mrivera:Dont take it to heart. Merely a figure of speech. Nothing wrong with your story. You are doing well and i wont reach this chapter if its not a good story. Each time I was just on the look out as to when the FL will finally accomplishes her mission. But the time seems to drag on plus the gap of posting takes a few days. So i find the waiting tedious. I apologize🙏. I meant no offense.
5yr
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Sunset_Vermont
Sunset_VermontAuthor

Please also note this in no ways means she won't be empress soon or maybe later.

Sunset_Vermont:I understand. We all want to see her as empress, reaching the goal. But also take note that this is like a 3 volume book 1 is foundation So that's why it is a lot of info here and there but it will get better, as I develop as a writer and as the story picks momentum. But most of all thank you for the review I'm always happy to receive all thoughts Whether negative or not as it helps make the story better for you all It's difficult for one to see their mistakes
5yr
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mrivera
mriveraLv13

Hi! Thank you. it feels good to have this interaction with you. Know this, your novel is highly appreciated. Just like you, you have passion for writing and i have passion for reading. I forgot that unlike the books on the shelves the Authors are around to read the comments. They can get hurts because it is painstakingly to write. Here comes someone just give a comments without knowing the Author's trend of thought as well as having consideration for their feelings. 🙏 Sorry about that😘

Sunset_Vermont:Your figure of speech has pricked me at first but indeed now I can improve 👍😁❤️😘
5yr
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mrivera
mriveraLv13

Hi! Thank you. it feels good to have this interaction with you. Know this, your novel is highly appreciated. Just like you, you have passion for writing and i have passion for reading. I forgot that unlike the books on the shelves the Authors are around to read the comments. They can get hurts because it is painstakingly to write. Here comes someone just give a comments without knowing the Author's trend of thought as well as having consideration for their feelings. 🙏 Sorry about that😘

Sunset_Vermont:Your figure of speech has pricked me at first but indeed now I can improve 👍😁❤️😘
5yr
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Sunset_Vermont
Sunset_VermontAuthor

Likewise. Realised you have been reading this for a while. WN didn't notify me of your comments I appreciate it Mrivera and I know your input comes from well intentions. Thanks again and stay well

mrivera:Hi! Thank you. it feels good to have this interaction with you. Know this, your novel is highly appreciated. Just like you, you have passion for writing and i have passion for reading. I forgot that unlike the books on the shelves the Authors are around to read the comments. They can get hurts because it is painstakingly to write. Here comes someone just give a comments without knowing the Author's trend of thought as well as having consideration for their feelings. 🙏 Sorry about that😘
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