Why would you even try and draw attention to this story if it isn't even yours? It's hot garbage; names aren't capitalized, there's author's notes dotted throughout the story breaking immersion, the character's don't have much depth to them, and it hasn't been updated in nearly two years. It's a steaming pile of crap. The author notes interrupting the flow of the story isn't even to give good information either; it's often just to give unnecessary information that isn't relevant in any way. One example is Kakarot's eye colour: "He gulped when Kakarot looked straight at him with his glowing yellow eyes(I just mixed red and green together and it came out with yellow eyes when he is a ssj) and flinched when he appeared right in front of him." All in all, this is a prime example of a trash fanfic and the thought that someone else would go out of their way to try and draw attention to it baffles me.
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